thenemisis14's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~Roller Coaster Junkie~]

funny as hell

lolz funny but kinda cool i like roller coasters 2 who doesnt

[Special Day]

again very good

same as lonely ones your voice trembles on high notes...

aside from that you didn't make any technical mistakes
pretty good for someone who self taught himself the guitar :)

CluppHead responds:

thanks i appreciate it. Today I should be getting a new software for recording audio, which should make things a lot easier as far as re-recording and/or recording the two tracks seperately. So, the songs should be sounder smoother, at least the new ones i'll put out

[Lonely Ones]

very nice

very good it was a pretty well made song even for a crappy laptop microphone

k umm ure voice kinda trembles some times on the high notes i recommend you leave those alone and have your girlfriend to help you with them
also see if you can organize people who play other instruments into a band
just a thought

CluppHead responds:

Yeah, don't have a girlfriend, but I think if i separate the tracks on an audio program, I should be able to put more focus in those areas. As far as other instruments, I have a couple of them laying around, and I can always add them as different tracks once I get the right software. So it's all in the works, these first few songs were kind of a test to see if it was worthwhile to keep pursuing this little hobby i've got going. And because of the great responses from listeners like yourself, i do believe i'll start investing in better equipment and software. Thanks for the reviews

[Ouch]

... ... ... ROFLMAO ... LOL ...

i showed this to my friends they... they fell off their chairs literally
um this was probaly the most original song i ever heard

so 3 questions
did u get kicked in the nuts
who did it guy or girl
are u gunna make a song soon

btw thanks for serving!!!

CluppHead responds:

Umm, it's been awhile since i've been actually kicked in the nuts. I think it was my ex-wife when i was courting her who did it last. I remember throwing up she kicked me so hard. I think i deserved it though because i threw her in the snow or something. As far as another song goes, i have a rough copy of one made, i just need to put it into the software machine and clean it up. I'm not sure if it's as good as OUCh, but from what i hear it's right up there with it. So...... hopefully within the next couple of days i'll have it released, so keep a look out for it!!

[Gentle Road]

very cheery

i could easily hear this in a oceanic scene in a video game maybe a port city or a beach...
it would fit perfectly in a final fantasy game :)

[piano loop (by Vepr)]

very good

this song is truely goth it has the nessecary dark mood and tone i love this
cant w8 to hear the final version
suggestion
add some vocals
keep making more
favorited :}

VeprUA responds:

thanx dude
yep, i'll finish it ....after stop drinking %)
-.-

PS
for vocals need text
but who gonna write a text?
sorry, i'm not very well speak english

[Nameless Song - Mutilation]

um oooook

alright first person to review this song...
um lets see the guitar sounds like u were banging away at the same string over and over
the drums were ok they were the only reddeming quality in the song
the overall beat to the music was completely lost to me
and this shouldn't be in goth its more like heavy metal or punk

sewallman responds:

The guitar was actually put in differant frets and tell me the truth. besides rock anthems what don't have the guitar on the same strings. The solo sucked I even have to say becouse of the microphone. Mutilation is a goth metal band. This is only our first song. it's instrumental so it wouldn't fit in heavy or punk.

[Running avay from Death]

awsome

the whole song rocks all the sounds seem to meld together and their are no screw ups anywhere
suggetions
1. vocals...
thats it its too good lolz
btw u spelled away wrong

[HeavenhelI {Goth Rock}]

pretty good

nice song it's well put together and really shows you put effort into it
suggestions
1. slow down the beat
2. lower the pitch of the keyboard (maybe to organ or the lower note equivalents on the keyboard)
3. add vocals

Lorens4444 responds:

Thanks for advices. I'm working on my vocal skills.

[Final Moment (Alex Sandford)]

interesting

listened 3 times still haven't understood the lyrics... not ure fault
im just reading a book and watching a movie at the same time
suggestions
1. go pro
2. submit in gothic on newgrounds ( kinda wierd i know but it goes well in that catagory)
3. keep cranking them out
o_o

Naitzmic responds:

lol, allright.
Thanks for the suggestions.
I'll keep them in mind. ;P